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Site Name: Panda Dream
Owner: Ravenclaw and Wondergenius
Reviewed by: Georgina
Reviewed on: 11th January 2009
Site Name
Panda Dream is cute but it’s boring. Matches ‘cute sites’ but the words are a bit too common. At least it’s easy to remember.
Coding and Validation
Your coding has 74 errors. And it looks a mess from your source code.
You have no doctype. You should have HTML 4.01 Transitional. You also have the wrong character encoding. Hence you need this at the start of all your documents:
<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01 Transitional//EN"
"http://www.w3.org/TR/html4/loose.dtd">
<meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html;charset=utf-8" >
But, for that to work, you must remove this:
<META http-equiv=Content-Type content="text/html; charset=iso-8859-1">
Remove that backslash at the end your favicon code. Backslashes are only used in XHTML.
SCRIPT should be SCRIPT type=”text/javascript”. What is this thing for? Your title? Or status bar? Either way, it isn’t working.
Also, where are all your quotes? STYLE type=text/css should be STYLE type=”text/css”.
In the following, remove the backslash:
/www.blogger.com/openid-server.g” />
All these random <!– –> that pop up should be removed. You also have two </head> tags; remove one.
Your <body> tag should be directly after </head>, not where it is now. And you don’t have an ending </body> tag.
You need an alt tag on every image and parts of your navigation, even if it’s blank.
Your coding is a huge mess that needs a lot of work.
Your CSS has 25 errors. Mostly because of your coloured scrollbar. It’s annoying, I’m telling you. So is the cursor.
I don’t like the idea of some of your CSS being embedded, when it’s a lot easier to have the CSS in a separate file called css.css. You can do this by saving the document in Notepad as “css.css” (with the quotation marks). In your website pages, you use this to call on the file:
<link rel="stylesheet" href="css.css" type="text/css">
Browser Compatibility & Usability
The navigation is clear but I did mention it only works in Internet Explorer. It’s a bummer. A lot of people use Firefox as well, and no one would change their browser just to view your site. You’re using a funny way of making the navigation links. Try image mapping at Lissa Explains – and link to a separate page; none of this funn JavaScript stuff. That is, put everything on your site page into a page called site.htm or something.
Despite that problem, Browsershots.org shows that your site looks the same in most browsers. I guess they just don’t all function well!
Your default text is of a comfortable size and is easy to read.
Your cursor, scrollbar and link effects on hover are very annoying and not very user-friendly. I can’t see the arrows on the scrollbar! Urgh.
Layout
It’s nice and simple. I like how the grass kind of overlaps the pink box; makes it look more realistic.
The layout is quite neat and you’ve chosen good colours. I think the stars in the pink box look a bit random though. They don’t really match.
Like I mentioned, your link effects are horrible.
Is the updates box necessary? It’s quite large. Don’t you have updates in your blog?
The layout should be centered, but it looks fine as it is as well. I just don’t like the big strip of purple on the right. No doubt it’ll get bigger in bigger resolutions.
Content
Site
Please don’t leave ‘Coming Soon’ notes or text that isn’t linked. No one likes to get the impression that your site is unfinished, especially visitors.
Are Ravenclaw and Wondergenius your real names? They sound pretty weird to me, if they are. No offense. Or, you could have picked more realistic nicknames.
‘About The Blog’ – man I hate this ‘coming soon’ stuff.
On the About Us page:
Snowy/Rocky should be Snowy, Rocky
Pixeling should be Pixelling
Riri( should be Riri (
Joely( should be Joely (
angelfish( should be angelfish (
eat them should be eat some.
On the Pets page:
Its got should be It’s got
it is fated should be it was fated
Dogs’ Home should be Dog’s Home
bones(each should be bones (each
grandfather( should be grandfather (
stopper( should be stopper (
power( should be power (
to the dead should be with the dead
now(not should be now (not
turning( should be turning (
dogs( should be dogs (
dogs(in should be dogs (in
won(and should be won (and
free( should be free (
(While should be (While
refuses eating should be refuses to eat
point that should be point out that
them, fruitflies should be them fruitflies
banana(when should be bananas (when
guy(OKS) should be guy (OKS)
Oh( should be Oh (.
On the Credits page:
My Space should be MySpace.
Visitors
Grrrr, none of this ‘coming soon’ stuff! Please.
On the Rules page:
bad( should be bad (
we are sorry about it, should be we are sorry;
navigations should be navigation
improve on should be fix.
On your Making an Icon tutorial:
100( should be 100 (.
On your Basic HTML tutorial:
out( should be out (
Link( should be Link (
Enter( should be Enter (
Double Enter( should be Double Enter (.
This isn’t really a tutorial. Just copy and paste codes.
On your January Poll:
kind of a pixel should be kind of pixel.
Affiliates
Consider renaming this page to ‘Links’.
On the application for affiliates page:
at the Information catogary should be in the Information field
at the back should be at the end
at the tagboard should be on the tagboard
type chatspeak should be use chatspeak.
On this page.. I hate your navigation. It won’t take me back to the affiliates page.
Contact
Self explanatory tagboard. Maybe an email address could be provided for contact on this page.
Originality & Creativity
Your site was quite unique with some unique ideas like your pets page. You had a nice creative layout.
Organisation & Errors
Your coding was pretty bad. Spelling and grammar was alright.
There weren’t any broken links. Things were fairly well organised.
Overall Comment
You guys sure did a great job with the site aesthetically, but the internal workings of your site needs work. Browser compatibility is VERY important. Not everyone will use Internet Explorer. Aim to make your site as user friendly as possible. Too many link effects and cursors and things!
Coding needs a lot of work. Other than that things are pretty good. Work on adding more things too, about your pets, or just visitor content.
